Thread: My story needs a critique. (please)
View Single Post
(#9 (permalink))
Old
Salvanas's Avatar
Salvanas (Offline)
Great, just my luck.
  
Posts: 1,577
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: London
12-15-2008, 08:37 PM
One thing I forgot to add, is the amount of spacing and the weird spacing you have between your work.

Also, reading it again, my last critiques still count. You need way more detail.

- “I've been lucky. I'll be lucky again.” -
Reply With Quote