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Originally Posted by LinnyLo
Hosto fuamuri- he,
Konnichiwa. Hajimemashite. Watashi wa (my name) desu. Douzoyoroshiku. Watashi wa juu nana sai desu. Amerika karakimashita. Watashi no uchi wa (my state) desu. Watashi no kichi wa chiisai desu [My city is small?]. Doko wa uchi desu ka. Koukou san nen sei desu [I am a high school junior?]. Do kushyo to ryokuu ga suki desu [I like reading and travelling?].
Watashi wa roku jin kazoku desu. Okaasan to otousan to oneesan to otouto to watashi desu. Oneesan wa juu hachi sai desu. Otouto wa juu yon sai desu. Shimaiga imasen [I have no sisters?]. Nan jin kazoku desu ka. Otouto to watashi hokke- ga suki desu [my little brother and I like hockey?]. Nani supo-tsu ga suki desu ka [what sports do you like?]. Petto ga imasu ka. Petto ga imasen.
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fuamuri > fuamiri-
Too many "watashi". I suggest that you drop the ones I highlighted.
kichi > machi
Doko wa uchi desu ka > Sochira no ouchi wa dochira desuka
Koukou san nen sei desu. <-- To the Japanese, this means you're in your final year of HS. HS is three years in Japan.
Do kushyo = Dokushyo
ryokuu > ryokou
jin > nin
okaasan > haha (You're too old to use 'okaasan', 'otoosan', etc. when you speak to others about them.)
otoosan > chichi
oneesan > ane
Shimai ga imasen. ---> ??? You just said you had an older sister above! oneesan = older sis.
Nan jin > Nan nin
Otouto to watashi > Otouto to watashi ha
Nani supo-tsu > Donna supo-tsu
ga > ha
Petto ga imasen. > Uchi wa petto ga imasen