[Salvanas]

Originally Posted by Altaru

Thanks for the advice. I'll see what I can edit to make part one better, and improve upon the later parts.

Lol, actually... The quite/quiet thing was a typo.

As for the number... Looking at the hard copy (I wrote it on paper in the middle of a REALLY dull history class), you're right. I think I did it for the sake of convenience at the time.

I know what you feel like, but it's best to leave those bad habits behind

Whenever you write a story, put your full effort and time into it.