[loversandhaters]

@ AnimeBaby112 : I really love your poem. The rhythm is great, though it's so sad.
@ redsteel : nice poem! :] I think it's kind of funny in the short way it's written. No extra drama, which makes it only more tragic.
@ Ningyou : I really love the end of your poem! That's important, because that's what decides most about how you feel of a poem. ;] You can be proud of it, great it got published!

This is one of the things I like to write, which I tend to do a lot.

Flawless

It’s in the moments like this,
When I don’t want to any more.
I should so much,
Could so much,
Promise so much…

But I want peace.
Silence.
Time stands still and nobody cares.
My promises break,
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on.

I want you to be with me.
To breath with you flawless,
And nothing more.
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on without us.
And the silence…

Loneliness swallows us.
When the people continue,
Without us.
They forget us,
And we are here together.
Without each other.

I look up to the sun,
Where are you?
I went through this too often,
I want to stay here,
With you nothing.
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on without us.
In the silence…