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Man in desperate need of help. - 02-11-2009, 08:20 PM

Hi there! Please help me!

With Valentines day coming up fast, im trying to translate a poem into japanese.

Im trying to get Kanji, romanji and english versions so that i can make sure what im saying is what im trying to say... as i tryed to use freetranslations.com, and the sentence 'To you I lay my heart bare' came out as 'i do heart to you in the nude'. which is NOT WHAT IM GOING FOR!

The poem is-

This poem I write to you,
It seems all that I can do,
To show you how much I care,
To you I lay my heart bare.

My translation is too embarrassing to post... as ive got VERY confused with the particles... as at first i thought sore = this, but then the dictionary told me it was kono? which i thought was these, and possessive as opposed to referring to an object? Then i wasnt sure if it was a ga or wa, topic or subject... and shi is poem? i thought that was four or death?!

Please help...

kore ga shi...?
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