[silvergazimon]

To Jesselt:

I know some grammar particles, such as the use of -masen (the negative form of something such as mimasen, "not looking"), (w)o, topic direction, wa, topic maker, ka, question marker. I do know enough to possibly string together a sentence but I have some trouble telling if I am using the right particles and/or if it sounds good.

To AlanX:

In a sense, I am looking for an editor to look it over to tell about mistakes and suggest anything to make it better.