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Heather's story thread - 03-29-2009, 03:27 AM

Ok, here is a story I wrote. Git ur reading glasses on. I will add more soon.


1. A gorgeous, and fine little diamond ring sitting in the display box all alone.
People pass by, taking a small glance, and give their favor to a necklace instead.
One lady looks at it with awe, then tries it on, but it was too small.
After the day is done, the jewelry store is locked, and the alarms are turned on.
I couldn’t help but to break in, steal the ring, and run away.
I jumped into my get away car, stuffed the ring in my bra, and got the hell out of there!
I stayed at a hotel, took the ring out of the box, and tried it on, hoping that it would fit. The ring fit almost too perfect to believe.
2. An hour later, someone knocks on my door. I answer, and to my surprise, a man pushes me against the wall, and demands I give him my money. I punched him across the face, push him to the ground with fury, and pulled out my gun. He begged me not to shoot him, but I cocked the gun, and shot him in the head, and quickly rushed out of the empty and silent hotel.
3. I’m in my get away car, driving nervously and at the same time, I’m glancing at my diamond ring that I risked my life for. It’s dark and late. No traffic. Just an open road that travels for miles. The skies are clear, the crickets are singing, and there is a cool breeze winding through my hair.
4. The road was just too smooth and quiet to cruise on. So I decided to drive a little faster, and I went from 60 to 70. But it wasn’t enough. So I tried 80, then 90, and I just said the hell with it, and pushed my old Impala to 110. All of a sudden, I see red and blue lights following me. I said hell no! So I moved up to 130.. The cop, driving a charger was still on my ass, but my Impala was at it’s limits. So I thought of a plan to ditch the cop without killing him, which is a big challenge for me. I spotted an old, dusty road, leading to the woods, so I slammed the brakes, and immediately took a left down into the road. The cop couldn‘t see me, because I was ghost- riding, which I thought was clever.
5. I drove down this old dusty road for about 2 miles, and I came to an instant dead end, and collided with a fallen tree. I crawled out of my car, grabbed my gun and ipod and started my journey through the quiet woods, that seemed to be haunted… perhaps with raging demons! It was dark, but luckily, there was a full moon that gave me enough sight to see in the night. I walked slowly, and behind me, something falls to the ground. I quickly turn around with my gun pointed, but it was just a tree limb. I continued walking deeper into the woods, and I see something run in front of me. It was just a deer. After all the times I almost had a heart attack, I finally sat down on a rock to take a rest. But I realized, I wasn’t sitting on a rock.. I was sitting on a coyote! I jumped up, and ran for my dear life just like Rosy O Donald running to a cheeseburger. There was no way I was going to outrun this pack of coyotes, so I jumped into a rushing river, but that didn’t do any luck for me, because I barely know how to swim!
6. I finally wake up to a man in my face. I said to him, “who the hell are you?” he answered, “You almost died in that river. What are you doing out here lady?” I said, “well, I’m running away, because I just stole a diamond ring, killed a man, and ran from the cops after speeding.” He said, “hah. I’m running from the cops, too.” I asked him once again, “what’s your name?” He said, “I’m James. Who are you?” “Just call me… Brandy.” Without asking why I gave him a fake name, he walked off, and came back with my gun. I didn’t like that at all. Nobody touches my gat! So I snatched my gun from him and said, “I need to get the hell out of here.” He said, “Please wait. I want to get to know you more. After all, I saved your life.” I took a quick sigh, and sat down with him by the river.
7. “So what do you want to know.. James?” He answered, “Where did you get such beautiful blue eyes? Who taught you how to swim? We both laughed for awhile and just starred at each other for at least 15 seconds, which seemed to be more like 15 minutes. So I asked him a question for myself. “How long have you been out here, running from the cops?” He looked at me in my eyes, stroked my hair with his hands, and irresistibly kissed me with his soft, sexy lips. He said to me, “I don’t even want to know how old you are, because I already love you.” I laughed and said, “Well then.. I’ll just tell you that I’m not 18 yet. So James.. how old are you?” he said, “I’m 22, and I’ve been on the run since I was 19.” We continued talking, and kissing. Our talks lasted for hours.
8. The next day, we were awakened by dogs barking, and men talking from a distance. It was no doubt that there was a bunch of cops looking for me, the underage criminal. I grabbed my gat, and ipod, and James grabbed his pants, and we started running like hell. As we were running, I said, “what, you trying to be like Tom Cruise, Mr. pant less?” He said, ”I didn’t have time to put on my damn pants.” I said, “yes you did, you’re just a slow-ass when it comes to getting dressed.” He said, “damn girl, lower your tone, those cops are gonna hear us complaining about my pants because our voice echoes through the woods kinda like how a bean burrito echoes through a fat old Mexican” I rolled my eyes and almost busted out laughing like a hyena.
9. After 10 minutes of running, we once again ditched the cops, and found a hiding spot that James had found when he first arrived in the woods. James put his pants back on, and I took deep breaths, because I wasn’t in shape, and 10 minutes of running was like hell for me. After the cops were gone, we crawled out of our hiding spot, and we both decided to leave the woods, because the cops would for sure be back.
10. We started our journey alongside the road in Alabama, and our destination was Albany, Georgia. As we were walking, I see someone familiar. I yelled out, “Tristan! Tristan, is that you?” I ran up to him, and he said to me, “yeah! What are you doin out here girl?” I said, “my friend and I are on the run. Now what about you? I thought you went to jail.” he said, “nah, I told you that because when I lost my home, and job, I had to move to Alabama, and I didn’t want to hurt your feelings.” I gave Tristan a warm hug of happiness, and he joined me and James.
11. Finally, we arrived into town, and booked a hotel. Tristan got a job as a contractor, James got a job as a drug dealer, and I got a half- job as a gambler. We were making a lot of money, and we were having fun traveling state to state. We even considered traveling country to country after awhile. I started to notice a change in my long-time friend, Tristan. He began to get jealous of me and James being together. I thought I went crazy when I considered this at first, but they both liked the idea, so I just dated them both.
12. One rainy day, both Tristan and James stayed at the hotel along with me. While watching TV, James suddenly grabbed my gat, and shot Tristan. He walked up to me and said, “I can’t do this any longer.” I said, “what the hell has gotten into you?!” He looked at me with such beady and teary brown eyes and said, “ My life is great for the moment, but, It’s in a mess I can’t untangle! I can’t be with you anymore, nor can I survive without you.” Before I could say anything he shot himself in the throat, and dropped dead with blood pouring out of his mouth and neck. I walked over to Tristan and did the best I could do to help him, but he, too, was bleeding to death.
13. I grabbed my gun and my money, jumped out of the window, and once again, ran away from the scene. This time, I didn’t have a get away car, nor did I have anywhere to run but to another forest that was nearby. I walked to a nearby bridge, looked at my diamond ring, and threw it into a lake. I thought about what James said to me.. And he made a good point. I can’t live like this forever. So I lay myself on the train tracks, and waited for a train to end my life. Sure enough, a train passed by, and crushed my body like a nut cracker. That was the end of my life, and the beginning of punishment in hell forever.


The light shines in the darkness, and the darkness will never understand it.
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