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Originally Posted by Aota
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I wouldn't say "This was his superior conduct." I'd rather hear something along the lines of... "This brought him fame, and title of "Tsar Liberator". Or something. Superior conduct just doesn't sound right. And I wouldn't use work so often. That tends to get boring. :X Maybe toiled? And "were worked"? Is that right? It sounds great though. Just some minor revision. Also, Firefox shows there were no spelling errors. :]
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