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04-08-2009, 02:37 AM

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Originally Posted by lizzey View Post
What I mean by unnecessary words is that you add too much words in one sentence when you can say it in a simple clearer way. Like the first sentence you added so many words that makes your reader confuse. Your welcome! Don't worry English is not my first language either. I usually read my essays out loud so I can correct my mistakes. When is your essay due?
My essay is due tomorrow, April 8.

Thank you for helping me a lot!!

Have a great day ^^
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