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UMIBOZU
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04-19-2009, 02:08 AM
You may as well combine "祖父と一緒に" with previous sentence.
(original) いつも宿題をした後で、 絵を書きます。祖父と一緒に描きます。
(combined) いつも、宿題をした後で祖父と一緒に絵を描きます。
Besides Nagoyankee's advice "描かないなら > 描かなければ",
"描けなければ" may suit too.
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