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04-19-2009, 07:50 PM
The main problem I can see with the essay is it talks quite a lot about "ACM" but doesn't really explain what it is. As a result, it assumes that the reader knows all about it from the start, which may not always be the case.
Fortunately, there is one woman in this world who can control me.
Unfortunately for you, she is not here.
"Ride for ruin, and the world ended!"
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