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04-21-2009, 11:34 PM

Here's your conclusion with just a few changes. Hope it helps you!

In conclusion, food-related illnesses are divided into two major categories, food-borne illness and food allergy. Technology is important for our lives; however, our health is more important. The knowledge of food-bourne illnesses and food allergies, and the necessary health management methods are insufficient right now. We hope that the United States continues to make medical advances in this field.

To anyone who might be irritated: Sorry about the multiple posts! I didn't even think of that until about two seconds ago. From here on, I will try to avoid doing it this way.
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