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Originally Posted by RKitagawa
ahah composition isn't my strongest point. 
so thanks a lot for the comments, I thought my picture seemed kinda... dead and empty, so your comments really help. THANKS, i will post an updated version as soon as its done! |
Actually I don't think there is anything wrong with the composition. You are drawn to the creature's eyes, then to what he is looking at. The fact that we can't see what he is looking at is what makes the composition unnerving, and that is a good thing. Put a butterfly in the space, and I see "creature looking at butterfly"....YAWN!
Leave it as is and the picture tells a story and the viewer can't help but wonder what will happen next.
It's perfect, don't change a thing.