Kyousuke
in all honesty, I really like it. I had a lot of trouble thinking of ways to improve it. biggest problem i have (which isnt even a very big problem) is her right arm. it looks nice, it seems correct to me. its just that since its coming straight out towards the camera, u really cant see much of the arm at all. so i was thinking maybe move it out a bit? up? down? just somewhere so that the silhouette would read better.
Here is a paint over i drew:
but i'm not happy with the way the arm looks up there... i think to the side would be better.
also... i dont know if this is just because of the clothes but she seems really flat chested lol
or maybe she just is like that... i dont know.
that one i'll leave up to you to decide.
anyways I like it! good luck in the competition! please post some progress updates! i'd love to see the finished product.
oh and, i agree about the eyes, should be more... round, and ... cute-sy-ish, ya know?
