Just trying to catch up on this thread this morning, so forgive me if I've left anyone out.
RKitagawa - Vastly improved, although your caterpillar should be a little further left. The image now draws the eye in rather than repelling it.
AlanX - Sorry, our firewall blocks the server your images are hosted on, so I can't comment
MissMisa - The face is angled incorrectly to sit naturally on the head. The head is facing to our left just a little (by the placement of her right cheek and left jawbone), yet her eyes, nose and mouth match the placement of a head facing to our right just a little.
Kyousuke - That's coming along brilliantly! Can't wait to see the finished result
For those of you seeking feedback on your artistic skills, I heartily reccommend the ImagineFX forum:
ImagineFX - Forums
They're an extremely helpful community, and it's not uncommon for artists posting there to be published in the magazine itself
As for posting something of my own? Hmm. I tend to do portraits more than scenes in my drawings, and my photography is mostly animals. Here are a few: