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05-24-2009, 01:53 PM

Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?
I'm sorry: this is long.


"A Book: Five Minutes to Tomorrow-side B"

The story continues.
The hero was living with Kasumi.
Kasumi had a twin sister named Yukari who was much alike to Kasumi.
Kasumi and Yukari went Italy on a trip and died one of them by a railway accident.
The survivor was Yukari.
Yukari’s husband named Ozaki disbosomed to the hero that he was wondering whether her wife was real Yukari. Both the hero and Ozaki knew that Kasumi used to love Ozaki.
The hero started to wonder Kasumi could be lying to be Yukari. He believed Kasumi really loved him, but he wasn’t able to forget the suspicion. He wondered whether she preferred Ozaki to him.
Ozaki and Yukari divorced.
Yukari came to see the hero and confessed she had memories of both Kasumi and Yukari herself and she didn’t know which herself was. Then, she said she wanted to live with him.
The hero really loved Kasumi and he could love the woman in front of him.
However, he got to know that Kasumi had never loved him when he listened to her.
He turned her down. Now he is sure that love is consisted with misunderstandings.

Impression: Do men prefer to be loved by a woman rather than to love a woman?
If I were the hero, I would live with her. I would like to live with a person I love, even if the person didn’t love me.

Thank you!


Hello, I may not understand English very well and I may lack words but I will try to understand you.

If you have questions about my post or Japanese customs, don't hesitate to ask.

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