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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro
Hi.
Would you correct my English, please?
"Kaoru Kurimoto"
Kaoru Kurimoto, the author of Guin Saga I wrote about it in this blog on February 8th and April 10th, died on 26th.
It’s really shocking to me. I’ve been reading Guin Saga for many years, and the story hasn’t finished. (The latest volume is the 126th.)
I knew that she’s been fighting against cancer, I’ve been praying for her recovery.
I’m so sad!
Guin Saga is very popular in Japan. The every volume was bestselling. Many of the readers must be crying now.
May her soul rest in peace.
Thank you.
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Manymen is right. That sentence should read, "Every volume was a best seller." You can also say, "Many of her readers," instead of, "..the readers".
That first sentence could also be reformatted, depending on how informal you want to be.
I would say, "Kaoru Kurimoto, the author of Guin Saga which I've written about in this blog on February 8th and April 10th, died on 26th." It's a bit of a run on sentence but passable if in an informal setting.
Everything else is perfect!
