Quote:
Originally Posted by darksyndrem
The Chat Poem
Volume 1
If you build your heaven,
You find your hell
If you destroy your hell,
You keep on living well
But only time will tell,
never go to the wishing well
Your life would be at stake,
to make such a mistake as that
So take your time,
to make a dime
And into your heart,
will I shoot my dart
Back to the place,
So we can be us
We must stay in the race,
You have my trust
And 'till death's door,
May I be yours
And with my all honesty,
I tell you thee,
We---will be.
Free to the end to fight and defend,
Fly away and feel okay.
Contributers
VampireGirl1314
KikiBunny23
Yuusuke
Darksyndrem
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here is the score on our poem okay guys?
ome of the lines seemed forced, but other then that it's good. 4/5 for the flow of the poem, 4/5 for the message, and 4/5 for the image that the poem sets in my mind
i wont say who scored this because its a secret.xD