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05-31-2009, 11:55 PM

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Originally Posted by manymen View Post
These are mistakes. There is no verb like "bestselling".
An offered revision could have been of more use instead of a observation of incorrect English usage.

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Originally Posted by Yuusuke View Post
Just a few things here and there.

but it's fine. (:
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I knew that she’s been fighting against(don't need against) cancer,
I confess I missed this sentence with my revision. The corrected sentence should be:

"I knew that she had been battling cancer."


Fortunately, there is one woman in this world who can control me.

Unfortunately for you, she is not here.

"Ride for ruin, and the world ended!"

Last edited by Koir : 06-01-2009 at 12:01 AM.
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