Thanks a lot, manymen and Lizh.
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Originally Posted by manymen
These are mistakes. There is no verb like "bestselling". 
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I see. I should have written “the story
isn’t finished.” And “
Every volume was a bestseller.”
Still I don’t see why I can’t write it “The every volume…”.
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Originally Posted by Lizh
Manymen is right. That sentence should read, "Every volume was a best seller." You can also say, "Many of her readers," instead of, ".. the readers".
That first sentence could also be reformatted, depending on how informal you want to be.
I would say, "Kaoru Kurimoto, the author of Guin Saga which I've written about in this blog on February 8th and April 10th, died on 26th." It's a bit of a run on sentence but passable if in an informal setting.
Everything else is perfect!

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I see. You don’t say “many of the readers.” But still I don’t see why I can’t say “many of the readers”. Learning English is too difficult…
About “I’ve written about…”.
My text book says that when I mention about the date or when it happened, I can’t use a perfect form, but my text book may be incorrect again.
Thank you!