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06-08-2009, 04:19 PM

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 View Post
to many times
have i tried
to be with you
yet you do not like
being with me
so that's why i must leave
you don't like me here
so why do i live with you
when you don't love me
to give me the permission
that i must need
to hang with my friends
go to the parties
have fun and be a teen
just let me live this once
let me be
let me feel free
just for once this week?
Can I be honest? That looks nothing like a poem. If that is a poem then I can transform this into a poem too, look:

Can I be honest?
That looks nothing
like a poem.

If that is a poem
then I can transform this
into a poem too,
look!


Voila!!!



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Since when is it immature to talk about pudding? Seriously, do you know the meaning of mature?
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