[HikariTenrai]

Originally Posted by RKitagawa

It's not bad, just a few minor things that I noticed.
One is your lines, it's fine to make it sketchy, but you should try to get nice smooth flowing lines. It's particularly noticeable in the hair.
The biggest "flaw" that I see is her right thigh.. where is it?
although it's supposed to be hidden from view, if you look at it, you should be able to at least see the top of it where it connects to the hips.
Lastly I'd just say to study the shapes of human anatomy, you seem to have the basics but some of the forms look to wide, or too blocky, etc...

BUT, I love your paintings man, especially that first one, great colors. maybe you could teach me a thing or two about color theory

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I truly appreciate it. I must admit that this is a rather old drawing and i wasn't as experienced in art as i am now. The mistakes you pointed out really makes sense. Sure, i'm able to share some tips but i'm not sure what you're looking for exactly xD
Perhaps colour moods, colour mixing or etc... I must also say that i'm not a good painter >.>'
I tend to be good at abstract stuff mostly since im able to paint what i feel.
I suggest you guys try collages. I had the most fun with them and they help you to take things to the next level.
Of course, if you have any more questions you can ask
But thanks for the help once again RKitagawa ^.^