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Originally Posted by TheLastFortnight
Here's one of mine, what do you think Kitagawa?
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haha, I really like it actually. great style.
few things I noticed:
I don't know if this is intentional or not, but if W.Nelson shoots his gun there, he's gonna miss. lol, that might have been on purpose, i dunno? I see he
does have a stupidity status haha.
but yeah, if you want him to look like hes gonna hit, you have to move him down so that his feet line up with the feet of the executioner.
If you were trying to make it look like he was clearly gonna miss then just ignore me lol.
other things were: executioner's left leg was too high, since we pretty much have a direct front view of his body the feet should line up.
I also think the grass that you drew was a bit much, when drawing grass I find it's usually better to draw the least amount possible in order to get the idea across. And it should be spread out more instead of all being in that one clump. It wasn't bad grass, there was just an unnecessary amount (that's just my opinion though).
feel free to post more!