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Originally Posted by TheLastFortnight
I know you've been busy Kitagawa, but I really would love to see your comments again and take all the time you need.
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I Friggin love the design of the executioner. It's awesome man, There is only one thing design wise that I would change: The belt buckle.
As far as I can tell from this picture it looks like it doesn't actually do anything, In fact, I don't even know if it is a belt buckle. If you wanted it to be functional, it would look like what I drew there.
About the drawing itself, there really isn't that much wrong with it, just a few things. As you can see, it's a little bit tilted, so that needs to be straightened up. and really, the only big problem with the actual drawing is the pose. look at it, you can draw one straight line directly through her, that's a sign of a boring pose. You want it to be more dynamic, especially with an awesome character like that, she should be doing something other than standing around!
But I really do like the design, in fact, I like it so much that I couldn't help but draw her:
You should start experimenting with perspective like this.
Draw things from above, below, behind, on the side. Every angle you can possibly think of, Draw It! You're definitely ready for more advanced stuff like that.
If you don't know much about perspective yet, start simple.
Draw simple objects in 1 point perspective, then 2 point, then 3 point, and possibly 4-5 point.
Then try drawing more complex objects in 1, 2, 3, and 4 point perspective.
as for your second picture, I see no problems