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Originally Posted by Kyousuke
Thnx a bunch! i referenced that pose from a picture. she is leaning on a table which is why the body tilts in that direction. i also fixed the should width. it looked to wide.
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ahhh, that makes sense now. lol I take back what I said then. You should have probably drawn in the table though.
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Originally Posted by Flesh
I was bored,so i thought i could post some of my art as well...
I know it has those lazy hands and legs,but its mainly because originally,it was a really small doodle,so there wasnt much space for details xD;
And pardon for the messy lines,i was cleaning them up,but abandoned it half-ways....i just got lazy cuz its a really time-consuming job if yer doing it with a mouse.So i only got her hair and some other random spaces cleaned up.....
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hmmm, proportion-wise everything is fine except the head (head is a little big).
Other than that I think you should just work on getting cleaner lines. All the details in the dress are a little hard to read.
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Originally Posted by DeathnoteCrazy102
one i posted on google and is awesome.
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lol, how modest of you.
It is pretty awesome though. Only thing I'd recommend is to change up your line thickness. All your lines are pretty much the same width.
I like the yotsuba one though. Yotsubato is my fav manga.