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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro
Hi.
Could you correct my English?
"Hayashi Rice"
I ate Hayashi Rice at the M&C Café today.
Hayashi Rice is similar to beef stew, and is a typically Japanese dish.
Many restaurants claim to have the original Hayashi Rice, and M&C café is no exception.
M&C Café is run by the MARUZEN book chain store. They claim their first president, named Hayashi, was the first person to make Hayashi Rice.
I’m not sure how legitimate that claim is, but I love the café. It has a good, quiet atmosphere and the servers appear to take pride in representing their company. It’s a very nice place to take a break after shopping.
Thank you.
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Even though it's essentially different, I'm reminded of the "Echoes" restaurant from the "White Album" anime. Hayashi rice sounds delicious from your description, especially since I enjoy homemade beef stew every once in a while.
As for the post composition, there weren't many change needed. Mostly the changes were in articles concerning ownership of items ("their company", "their president", etc.), and changing some instance of "have" to "take". The second kind of change is mostly personal, so if a different meaning is wanted changes can always be made.