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DaisyMaria (Offline)
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07-16-2009, 05:56 PM

Hi, everyone , this is my first post on this forum.

Happy to be here!

I've been trying to figure out lately, how to write haikus - not sure yet about it. These are some of my atempts:


Here, too, somewhere,
hidden by the big, grey blocks,
the nightingale sings.


I do not miss now
the mountain, any longer –
concrete feels the same.


My weapons are lost,
buried by him, who always
moves lower than me.


DaisyMaria
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