Hi, everyone

, this is my first post on this forum.
Happy to be here!
I've been trying to figure out lately, how to write haikus - not sure yet about it. These are some of my atempts:
Here, too, somewhere,
hidden by the big, grey blocks,
the nightingale sings.
I do not miss now
the mountain, any longer –
concrete feels the same.
My weapons are lost,
buried by him, who always
moves lower than me.
DaisyMaria