07-16-2009, 07:37 PM
Here's a 'haiku' by Buson:
"Pressing Sushi,
After a while,
A lonely feeling."
I think 4-4-5 is also a kind of haiku format isn't it? Might have a different name though.
And one by me:
Rinsing strawberries,
besides the summer flowers,
outside it's raining.
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