[angellight]

me and nard decided to both make a poem based on the same themes..and this was what we came up with..

nard's:

Still got many words I haven't said to you
Still got a lot of gifts which I haven't given
Parting ways is always so sudden
Sometimes without even a clue
Why it happened
Even before I revealed everything
How much tears you must have shed alone
A fool I am for not knowing
My self-ignorant acts I simply cannot condone

Only you, when I'm not talking
Know what my hearts wants to say just by looking in my eyes
Only you who hears my blessings
Know fully well this is not the reason my heart cries

Afraid of letting you discover that to make you stay is my plan
Forgetting my passionate pleas
Love and lies go hand in hand
Indulging in ridiculous fantasies
Remember you said that when I'm by your side
Anywhere on Earth is heaven
Smiling brightly like a child without pride
You lighted up my grey and dim den

Only you, when I'm not speaking
Know what my hearts wants to declare by observing my trends
Only you who hears me wishing
Know fully well this is not what my heart intends

Please don't go, living is impossible without you
My whole life revolves around your existence
You will forever be my one and true
Although in front of you I may appear clumsy
The sole reason is because of my failure to behold
The dazzling miracle that is you

and mine:

when the day loses it's light
and the emptiness turns cold
like an eagle in full flight
you leave me with no-one to hold
not a whisper was spoken
not a single tear fell
like a falling vase - it's broken
this enchantent over - a useless spell
how could these have eluded me
how could i possibly oversaw
the tempest in the calmest seas
and the thief at the door
i want so much to make you stay
yet i know not how
perhaps this is the price i must pay
but all i know is i need you now
i remeber that in my arms you spoke
that heaven was enveloped within
upon those words now i choke
and pray forgiveness for my sin
i realize now that you are my sun
that that very heaven was you
without which my world seems dun
veiled in darkness and lost in the blue
somehow you seem to know what i'm saying
just by looking me in the eye
you know full well just what i'm praying
so is this how we say goodbye
all my life i'm wondered if miracles were true
and i wonder why i've never been shown
but now i understand, for now i've known
that the most beautiful miracle, was you

well..if you've read it you'll see that what's in mine is basically the ideas from his, and tt's because he made me make a poem based on his..-.-

o well..happy happy joy joy..lalalalala..oro *.*