08-03-2009, 07:43 AM
I'd check your translation into English before you start the translation into Japanese.
"Makes you dream come true" is not complete English. It does not sound right. Anyone who translates this into Japanese might be giving you a sentence that isn't what you wanted in your own language.
The eternal Saint is calling, through the ages she has told. The ages have not listened; the will of faith has grown old…
For forever she will wander, for forever she withholds; the Demon King is on his way, you’d best not be learned untold…
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