View Single Post
(#7 (permalink))
Old
Tenchu's Avatar
Tenchu (Offline)
-
 
Posts: 997
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: -
08-04-2009, 06:52 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by AnniBirde3 View Post
oops, sorry. Its funny, ive spoken english my entire life but i still make little sense when i speak.
Whats not making sense? let me see if i can re-word my gibberish
Try punctuation. Capitalize the necessary letters. Only use phrases which people actually use when they speak in real life. That should help.


The eternal Saint is calling, through the ages she has told. The ages have not listened; the will of faith has grown old…

For forever she will wander, for forever she withholds; the Demon King is on his way, you’d best not be learned untold…
Reply With Quote