08-16-2009, 06:00 AM
If you don't mind a suggestion:
会社は締めくくられました
(because of the fire) Tamaya's business was/got wound up.
wound ← to wind.
Using "extinguished" here will cause problems. It isn't necessarily incorrect, but it does require some explanation to prevent misunderstanding.
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Tamaya having begun as Kagiya's apprentice, that "therefore" is incorrect.
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A gentleman is someone who never insults another by mistake.
Last edited by girigiri : 08-16-2009 at 06:08 AM.
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