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girigiri (Offline)
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08-16-2009, 06:00 AM

If you don't mind a suggestion:

会社は締めくくられました
(because of the fire) Tamaya's business was/got wound up.

wound ← to wind.
Using "extinguished" here will cause problems. It isn't necessarily incorrect, but it does require some explanation to prevent misunderstanding.

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Tamaya having begun as Kagiya's apprentice, that "therefore" is incorrect.


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Last edited by girigiri : 08-16-2009 at 06:08 AM.
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