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Originally Posted by JustinATTACK
Since no one ever said anything about this I'm posting it again.
I need some advice on how to make it better.
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Sharpen your pencil. lol
Umbrella is too small.
The shape of your hair clumps are strange.
Check this out:
LINK Not the greatest tutorial ever. But this person knows how anime hair works. Study that.
Practice your clothing more.
Sorry I don't have any better advice on that... The only way to improve cloth is to practice.
There are hardly any shadows where they should be. Think more about which parts would be in the shade and which would be in the light.
LINK (Not really a shading tutorial. But can you see how carefully this artist thought about the lighting?)
sorry I can't do a paint-over Justin. This is the best I can give you. Hope it helps.