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Originally Posted by RKitagawa
Sharpen your pencil. lol
Umbrella is too small.
The shape of your hair clumps are strange.
Check this out: LINK Not the greatest tutorial ever. But this person knows how anime hair works. Study that.
Practice your clothing more.
Sorry I don't have any better advice on that... The only way to improve cloth is to practice.
There are hardly any shadows where they should be. Think more about which parts would be in the shade and which would be in the light.
LINK (Not really a shading tutorial. But can you see how carefully this artist thought about the lighting?)
sorry I can't do a paint-over Justin. This is the best I can give you. Hope it helps. |
Thanks! Your advice is greatly appreciated!
This is the first time I've ever drawn clothing of any kind,
I usually draw abstracts.
It's okay I don't need one. It helps tons!