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11-02-2009, 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by MissMisa View Post
Hello hello~

I'm drawing a girl, and something is wrong with her face. Her eyes look strange, and her mouth is off. I changed the eyes a few times, but I can't get it right.

Some advice would be great. Thanks
The right eye is slanted weird compared to the one on the left. It'd probably look better if you turned it counterclockwise a bit.

Also, the nose is really big, which throws off. The longer line outlining it makes it look as if it should be passing infront of the left eye, which it doesn't. I suggest moving both lines outlining it closer to the center of the face. The make-up on the corners of the eyes also extent onto where the nose should be, so you might want to touch up on that.

The mouth should be slanted down more as well instead of up.

Just my advice, hope that helps.
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