[darksyndrem]

I have been working on this since I posted this topic, and have come up with a few words for a conclusion. I've no doubt it needs work, but let me know what you think.

"As it was stated before, many things may be required to achieve greatness, but it is certainly people that is needed most of all. This is a requisite for greatness. Though it is not always hard to obtain, it can be, at times, nearly impossible. This depends on how deep the necessity may be. I have stated three levels of the requirements of people; a literal sense that may even be considered common logic, an entirely philosophical sense that is not necessarily believed by many people, and a sense that can be found in between the two. It is certain that this necessity is quite diverse. And I do believe it is the thought that people are to help us grow in maturity and strength that is most valuable. It is, indeed, something that I wish to value more than everything I know. This is what I long for within my journey as a person, and as an artist."

I think there may be quite a few grammatical errors, and possible a small repetition of words. I am looking for constructive criticism though, so if you want to point something out as far as the repetition of words, or something similar, try to give a suggestion if you can.