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Originally Posted by manganimefan227
Yeah that's what I guessed it was . . . Hey it isn't cruel!! I've been told much worse, some bashterd called a story I wrote retarded, although it kinda was but that's why it wasn't supposed to be a story for say!!
Sorry about that, Thank you for your explanation!!
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Belated, but yes, what sceptilemaster says about word count is true, however being able to do that comes with practice and knowing how to manipulate language.
Regardless, give it another go; perhaps just write up the scene that introduces your main character and then come back. and tweak your character stats a bit. 12 is just too young for the kind of backstory you're suggesting; it makes readers want to roll their eyes as it's just not believable.