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Originally Posted by bestman
My speech is as following:
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I think this is a great speech as it is without the addition of anything more. The phrase you use is very clear and there is virtually no chance of anyone misunderstanding it even if your pronunciation or intonation are very far from the mark.
I say go for it as it is. When it comes to things like this, quality is far more important than quantity. One heartfelt phrase is all you need.
To add more just brings the risk of spoiling it.