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Originally Posted by Nyororin
I think this is a great speech as it is without the addition of anything more. The phrase you use is very clear and there is virtually no chance of anyone misunderstanding it even if your pronunciation or intonation are very far from the mark.
I say go for it as it is. When it comes to things like this, quality is far more important than quantity. One heartfelt phrase is all you need.  To add more just brings the risk of spoiling it. |
I endorse what Nyororin said. I also want to criticize OP a bit: Do you really trust people you don't know on an Internet forum to translate something so vitally important for you from scratch? I smell a lack of common sense!
