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03-14-2010, 03:51 AM

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なんか言いたいことがあるの
ハッピーバースディー!
Umm, why put なんか in there at all? Why 言いたい? And why a の at the end?

Sorry, but this just sounds really weird to me in it`s entirety...

If you NEED to write "something" (which you shouldn`t), at least put it as なにか.
言いたい would sound a lot better as 伝えたい... And the の isn`t needed at all, and makes it sound really wrong to me. Just imagine sticking a か on the end of that, and having an angry guy come up to you saying it...

ETA; If I were writing a card like that (I wouldn`t, but that`s beside the point) - I`d probably write it as this;

(君に)伝えたい事がある/あります・・・
お誕生日おめでとうございます!

With the 君に optional, and either ある or あります at the end.


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Last edited by Nyororin : 03-14-2010 at 03:56 AM.
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