[hatsuto11]

Originally Posted by Nokutetsu

As reccomended, I thought I'd post all my questions in one thread. It also means I can track my progress. Because I don't have a lot of resources to learning the language, I'm always extremely nervous as I'm learning from here: JLPT LEVEL4 GRAMMAR JLPT Grammar list E-Japanese.jp. And am pretty much left to figure out the rest myself.

So I'm aware my grammar is probably extremely bad...which is why I'm here to ask for help. If anything is wrong (even slightly or extremely) I'd like to ask you be nice about it no matter how stupid a mistake it is. Thankyou

So...my first question, is me testing what I've learned over the past month or two. I've not finished all the JLPT4 grammar, but I'm wondering if anyone could read over these sentences below and tell me what mistakes there are in them and why, and how to fix them.

(Also, on the computer I'm using I can't use Japanese scripts at the moment. Sorry for the romaji)

Watashi wa ashita gakkou ni iku tsumori desu.
Watashi wa benkyo suru noga heta desu.
Watashi wa utau noga suki desu, demo gita to duramu suru noga jozu desu.
Watashitachi wa asatte shinjuku no eki ni ikitai deshou.
Terebi o mite mo ii desu ka?
Sumimasen, harajuku hashi ga doko ni arimasu ka?
Watashi no kuruma no houga jitensha yori hayai desu.
Tabemasen ka, ne?
Matte Kudasai, Yonde kudasai, mitte kudasai, tabete kudasai.
Are kuroi densha wa furui desu ka?
Watashi wa ringo o tabetakunakatta.
Anata mo ginkokujin desu ka?
Ren-san ga kuruma no naka deshita.
Eigakan ni ikimashou ka?
Watashi wa chizu o yomu tsumori desu.
Furansu no houga America yori chiisai desu.
Anata wa no houga watashi yori furui desu.

this one is senseless: Watashi wa utau noga suki desu, demo gita to duramu suru noga jozu desu.
mitte kudasai (do not double the te)=mite kudasai* (miru is a godan doushi and not ichidan, so you should treat it like that)
Are kuroi densha wa furui desu ka?= ano kuroi.......**
Anata mo ginkokujin desu ka? (what do ya mean by ginkoku????)
Anata wa no houga watashi yori furui desu (you shoudl drop the wa because you cannot use 2 particles directly one after the other the way you did in that sentence)
Watashi wa ringo o tabetakunakatta: this one is correct but kinda meaningless. what do ya mean you didn't wanna eat an apple? it is sort of incomplete, i mean, i think u'd better not use it alone:S