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I'm e-vincible.
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Join Date: Jan 2008
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03-20-2010, 05:39 PM
Pretty good, but just something I noticed immediately in the first one.
The proportions are off, and I must say in a very bad way. No other way I can word it outside of you breaking her spine.
The curve of her butt is shown at the top of her skirt, but you have her thigh curving under her skirt long before it should.
Tyrien.DeviantArt~
As of 08/11/2008 5:33 PM Eastern Standard time I now officially own:
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Last edited by Tyrien : 03-21-2010 at 12:44 PM.
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