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Originally Posted by ayabarnette
Hi everyone, I'm a member of deviantart, you may view my art gallery here:
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I'm still developing my skill but I hope you have time to critique, if you're a member..since it will be very helpful for me. thanks.   |
Wow! That's great, Ayabarnette!! Keep up the great work! ;D
If you don't mind some suggestions on this site, I'll just give a few:
1. To remember the angle in which you are drawing. As a fellow artist, it's very hard to keep the angle of the subject, I TOTALLY understand that. I've had a few Uchiha Sasuke's turn out lop-sided...XDD lol...but, I noticed on the drawing: "The Sorceress", her hand seems to just lay staright down, whereas, her hand would most likely be resting on the ground on which she's sitting. But, if you wanted it that way, I can see the logic in that, too.
2. Also on most of the drawings, the girls' chests seem to be a bit lop-sided, and uneven. I have this same problem, don't worry.
It's hard to keep them even, (even in real life XD lol) but what I find helps, is if you draw one side, then put a ruler undernath it, and sketch where you want the other one to land. XD
3. I noticed on: "The Sorceress" that her legs seem to thin out too fast. Don't worry about making the legs too big; if you have the tendency to make them too small, aim for making them too big, anf they'll usually tuen out just about right.
Also, don't worry if the legs go off the paper, it's not a problem to the viewer. ^_^
Those are all the suggestions I have! I don't mean to be too brash, and sorry if I was! DX
I love your art work!! KEEP DRAWING!! XDDDDDDD
Have a wonderfully blessed day!
~HonoraryJapaneseGirl~