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05-05-2010, 11:07 PM

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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro View Post
Hi.
Could you correct my English?


It’s Golden Week here. (Today is May 5th)
Golden Week refers to the period from April 29th to May 5th when there are four national holidays. Many people go out for a trip during the term. You might notice that many Japanese tourists appear in your countries in the week every year.
I went to a beach and gathered clams. Have you ever done this? Digging clams with a small rake. (I'm not sure if this is right punctuation-wise) I’ve got a bucket of clams, and made a rice dish with them. I really enjoyed it.

Thank you!
Other than that, this is pretty good! Just make sure to always indicate a noun in some way in which you are applying the verb to, in this case, saying WHAT you enjoyed, even if you use a nondirect noun like "it". And the above was informational! Thank you for the facts!


My Life Sucks- The kids I babysit have drooled, ripped or drawn on all of the cards and put the cars with the little people in the microwave!

I have no Friends- The cats have scratched and destroyed all of the DVDs!

I always owe someone- In fact I put two os in it!

I always ruin my clothes with Bleach!- The show is so dom suspensful I spill my grape soda on them!

But . . .I'll live.

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