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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro
Hi.
Could you correct my English?
It’s Golden Week here. (Today is May 5th)
Golden Week refers to the period from April 29th to May 5th when there are four national holidays. Many people go out for a trip during this time. You may have noticed that many Japanese tourists appear in your country during this week every year.
I went to a beach and gathered clams. Have you ever dug for clams with a small rake?
I got a bucket of clams, and made a rice dish with them. I really enjoyed it.
Thank you!
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Most of the revisions made were the same as the other two responses. The major revision done was with the sentence fragment about digging clams. I combined the two sentences together as a questioning statement that would make the reader think about doing the action themselves if they hadn't done so in the past.
Hope that is of some help, Yuri!
