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CodeN (Offline)
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06-15-2010, 07:09 AM

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Originally Posted by 0219kouta View Post
Nice to meet you!

I'm in Saitama next to Tokyo.
I'm studying English and medicine.

Now,my English speaking level is low,but I want to be able to be a good English speaker.
I'm using Skype and chatting with a few people in English or Japanese.
Please let me know your Skype name.

Probably,I can help you.

Best regards.

Takayuki
I live in Saitama which is right next to Tokyo.

^^ You need a verb for it to be a complete sentence, so I added (live). Yes, "in" can be used as a verb, but "live" is more specific. The way you used "in" in that sentence is very vague. I could ask you, do you live in Saitama, do you work in Saitama, are you just visiting a relative in Saitama, or are you just there at this specific time, and day?

I'm currently studying English and medicine at Tokyo University.

^^ When are you studying (Currently), and where are you studying at? These corrections are not neccessary, but if you want to be more specific, then you would have to edit that sentence.

Fixed.

Last edited by CodeN : 06-15-2010 at 07:14 AM.
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