06-20-2010, 01:24 AM
Yes, I agree with the person above me. They're wonderful!! All of them!! The proportions of the arms do need a little work, though. x) Also, Gaara's expression, I believe it could use a little more shading to get the idea of the facial creases and such across. Being that he doesn't have eyebrows (lol) it's hard to see the form of the face a little, so I recommend a little good ol' finger shading. Either lightly shade the area with pencil, and rub it in with your finger, or a little charcoal on your finger and shading. (be careful with that one, though. Unless you have a special kind of eraser, it won't come out very well, so you have to make sure you're right on with the shading.) XD
Just my tidbit! And you're really, really great. XDDD
~HonoraryJapaneseGirl~
~...Why must the different be cast away, be cast into a deep, dark pit of loneliness, being mocked and scorned as the the enemy...and eventually...become it...?~ ~HonoraryJapaneseGirl~ ~.::{Akatsuki Clan Member--Leader of California}::.~ ~.::{Michiko Manami}::.~
Last edited by honoraryjapanesegirl : 06-20-2010 at 01:27 AM.
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