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Busier Than Shinjuku Station
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Posts: 1,066
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Kawasaki,Japan
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07-31-2010, 03:39 AM
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Originally Posted by Columbine
Yes, I think that's great. Only a very few corrections; you're only talking about one custom so use the singular 'tradition'; 'legal adult' can mean a lot of things, so i've change it to 'legal drinking age' so it's absolutely clear what you mean by 'legal'. I changed 'must' because 'will' is a little more natural, and 'must' usually means an obligation.
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Columbine, thanis a lot! 
Hello, I may not understand English very well and I may lack words but I will try to understand you.
If you have questions about my post or Japanese customs, don't hesitate to ask.
I YamaP 
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