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3)[...] "永遠"　という言葉については今回の作品を作っていく� ��えでも常に意識していま
したからね (here I don't know how to translate only the part in bold... also I don't know if translate the part with "でも" as "で" and then "も" or "でも" (but), it happen often that I'm indecise about it..

うえで　上で　mean 'when' or 'while'
も　mean 'also'
Because I was also aware of the word '永遠' while I was creating the piece.


6) "これはもう" mean "other than this?

I don't think so.

8) そうならないのは (this mean ' cannot help?')

I don't think so.

I'm sorry but I don't have enough time to do all..