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08-10-2010, 04:49 AM

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Originally Posted by YuriTokoro View Post
Can I say “They talked about how to determine what morally correct behavior is.”?
When you speak, would you say something like the sentence you wrote?

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I would say "They talked about determining morally correct behavior."

It communicates the concept without needing extra modification that could possibly confuse the reader or cause him/her to lose interest in the sentences that follow.

The modified sentence could work well as a transition to further paragraph that list and explain the kinds of morally correct behavior discussed in that contest.


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